7. 30 Homework

2018-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. Give details as relevant. - Do you think job satisfaction is more important than salary when choosing a job? I think both are very important but job satisfaction is a little more important than salary when choosing a job. Almost every people wait sunday for taking a rest. But I think the work must not be too painful or boring because people spend most of their times at working. Life is short. If the work which spend our most time is satisfied, the life quility will be higher than opposite case.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름] ~~

See you tomorrow.

- Blair

I think both are very important but job satisfaction is a little more important than salary when choosing a job. Almost every people wait sunday for taking a rest. But I think the work must not be too painful or boring because people spend most of their times at working. Life is short. If the work which spend our most time is satisfied, the life quility will be higher than opposite case.

I think both are very important but job satisfaction outweigh the importance of these two. Almost all people look forward to weekend / Sunday for taking their rest / day offs. But I think work mustn\'t be too painful or boring because people spend most of their time working. Life is short. If we spend most of our time in job satisfaction, then our lives quality will be high.

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