7/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought about my honeymoon.
We stopped firstly in Hawaii airport and transferred to Lasvegas.
In Hawaii airport, we met an old man who looked very embarrassed.
He told me \'Are you Korean? help me please\'.
He should transfer to another island in Hawaii.
He was waiting for an airplane in the gate, and He wanted to smoke so he just walked out the door.
Anyone stopped him.
After smoking, he wanted to go inside but he couldn\'t.
Even, He has not his passport and can not speak English and didn\'t know the spell of his name and wife\'s name who is waiting inside.
I told to an official about this and I had an appointment to go inside the gate and tell his wife to transfer his passport through an official and I did.
Finally, I met him inside.
In Lasvegas, we mistake the boarding time of tour bus for a helicopter tour of the grand canyon.
I was so expensive and I heard the tour bus waits for no man.
But, fortunately, the bus was waiting for us.
I thought I got lucky back from the old man.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for catching up with your homework. I really appreciate it. ^ ^
That\'s what \"karma\" is all about. Do good things to others and it will come back to you. I guess you are right! ^ ^ You got lucky because you helped somebody who was in need. I can tell that you really are a very good person! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>Correct
We stopped firstly in Hawaii airport and transferred to Lasvegas.
We stopped firstly in Hawaii airport and transferred to Lasvegas.
>>Firstly, we stopped at the Hawaii airport then transferred to Las Vegas.
In Hawaii airport, we met an old man who looked very embarrassed.
In Hawaii airport, we met an old man who looked very embarrassed.
>>At the Hawaii airport, we met an old man who looked very embarrassed.
He told me \'Are you Korean? help me please\'.
He told me \'Are you Korean? help me please\'.
>>Correct OR
>>He asked me if I was Korean and asked for my help.
He should transfer to another island in Hawaii.
He should transfer to another island in Hawaii.
>>He needed to transfer to another island in Hawaii.
He was waiting for an airplane in the gate, and He wanted to smoke so he just walked out the door.
He was waiting for an airplane in the gate, and He wanted to smoke so he just walked out the door.
>>He was waiting for an airplane at the gate, and wanted to smoke so he just walked out the door.
Anyone stopped him.
Anyone stopped him.
>>Nobody stopped him.
After smoking, he wanted to go inside but he couldn\'t.
After smoking, he wanted to go inside but he couldn\'t.
>>Correct
Even, He has not his passport and can not speak English and didn\'t know the spell of his name and wife\'s name who is waiting inside.
Even, He has not his passport and can not speak English and didn\'t know the spell of his name and wife\'s name who is waiting inside.
>>What\'s even worse was that he didn\'t have his passport, he couldn\'t speak English and he couldn\'t spell his name nor his wife\'s name who was waiting inside.
I told to an official about this and I had an appointment to go inside the gate and tell his wife to transfer his passport through an official and I did.
I told to an official about this and I had an appointment to go inside the gate and tell his wife to transfer his passport through an official and I did.
>>I told an official about this and that he must be allowed to enter the gate and also asked the official to have his wife give his passport through him.
Finally, I met him inside.
Finally, I met him inside.
>>Correct
In Lasvegas, we mistake the boarding time of tour bus for a helicopter tour of the grand canyon.
In Lasvegas, we mistake the boarding time of tour bus for a helicopter tour of the grand canyon.
>>In Las Vegas, we mistakenly took a helicopter tour to Grand Canyon instead of taking the tour bus.
I was so expensive and I heard the tour bus waits for no man.
I was so expensive and I heard the tour bus waits for no man.
>>It was so expensive and I heard the tour bus driver say that they will not wait for late passengers.
But, fortunately, the bus was waiting for us.
But, fortunately, the bus was waiting for us.
>>Bu fortunately, the bus waited for us.
I thought I got lucky back from the old man.
I thought I got lucky back from the old man.
>>I thought I got lucky because of that old man.
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