7,30 hw
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Hello Ms. [이름]!
Well, thank you for understanding the question clearly.
Not all of my students have understood the question I have given.
And I am interested to know more about what happened to you.
You should have written more about it.
It would be more interesting to read if you have explained more about what happened and what lesson have you learned from it.
But anyway, you made a good start. So keep it up and keep improving.
See you later this afternoon!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I had a capital error 10 years ago.
>> correct!
>> or: I made a grave mistake 10 years ago.
I had invested in a shsky business.
>> correct! (shaky)
So I lost some money and I disppointed some people that inytoduce business.
>> So I lost a huge amount of money and I disappointed some people whom I introduced to the said business.
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