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What are the disadvantages of being a working student?
First, they get less time to study than full-time students. While working students work, everyone else is studying, For working students to get the same grade as a full-time student, they have to study through the night, It is not impossible for working students to get good grades, but it is way harder than full-time students. Another disadvantage of being a working student is that there are possibilities of losing an important experiences that we can only do now. Whiles others are hanging out with their friends and go traveling, working students will not be able to experience those everyday.
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First, they get less time to study than full-time students.
>> Correct.
While working students work, everyone else is studying,
>> Correct.
For working students to get the same grade as a full-time student, they have to study through the night,
>> Correct.
It is not impossible for working students to get good grades, but it is way harder than full-time students.
>> Correct.
Another disadvantage of being a working student is that there are possibilities of losing an important experiences that we can only do now.
>> Another disadvantage of being a working student is that there are possibilities of losing experiences that we can only do now.
Whiles others are hanging out with their friends and go traveling, working students will not be able to experience those everyday.
>> While others are hanging out with their friends and traveling, working students will not be able to experience those everyday.
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