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What are the activities that you can do in a small town.
There are many things yo can do in a small town than you have thought. Some things, such as going to a cinema or using the internet are the things you can do in both small town and big cities. However, there are also things that you can do only in small towns. First, you can memorize your neighbor\'s names and make small conversation with them. Also, in small town you can have a little garden of your own, or grill barbecues outside. You can also hear frogs singing at summer night. There are a lot of things that you can experience only in small towns, and things you experience in big cities, you will be able to do in small town as long as you have your car. Overall, I believe that small towns are better to live than big cities.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby :)
There are many things yo can do in a small town than you have thought.
>> There are many things that you can do in a small town than you have thought.
Some things, such as going to a cinema or using the internet are the things you can do in both small town and big cities.
>> Correct.
However, there are also things that you can do only in small towns.
>> Correct.
First, you can memorize your neighbor\'s names and make small conversation with them.
>> Correct.
Also, in small town you can have a little garden of your own, or grill barbecues outside.
>> Correct.
You can also hear frogs singing at summer night.
>> Correct.
There are a lot of things that you can experience only in small towns,
>> Correct.
and things you experience in big cities, you will be able to do in small town as long as you have your car.
>> Correct.
Overall, I believe that small towns are better to live than big cities.
>> Correct.
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