7.31 Homework

2018-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

Taking a picture is important part of my life because it reduces my stress that I got from the work or other situations. As I imagining how and where to take a picture, I feel excited itself. But the most important thing is that pictures remind me wonderful moment what I want to remember forever.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. You did great! Keep it up!

~~Teacher Kate

1. Taking a picture is important part of my life because it reduces my stress that I got from the work or other situations.

>>>Taking pictures is an important part of my life because it reduces my stress that I get from work or other situations.

2. As I imagining how and where to take a picture, I feel excited itself.

>>>I feel excited when I imagine how and where to take a picture.

3. But the most important thing is that pictures remind me wonderful moment what I want to remember forever.

>>>But, the most important thing is that pictures remind me of wonderful moments that I want to remember forever.

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