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7.31.Mon
Q: What do you think is the biggest change in how families are in your country?
A: I think the increase of one household is the biggest change in how families are in my country. There were not lots of people who live alone. However, as times go, people who live in the far city from their family and people who don’t want to marry emerged. So the one household increased. And it resulted the number of restaurant that for one person increases.
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Hi there Sandy! It was nice reading your answers and views about this topic. Have a wonderful day!
~ T. Demi^^
I think the increase of one household is the biggest change in how families are in my country.
~ T. Demi^^
I think the increase of one household is the biggest change in how families are in my country.
>> I think the increase in each household is the biggest change in how families are in my country.
There were not lots of people who live alone.
>> There aren\'t many people who live alone.
However, as times go, people who live in the far city from their family and people who don’t want to marry emerged.
>> However, as time passed by, people who live in a far city from their families and people who don\'t want to marry emerged.
So the one household increased.
>> So one\'s household increased.
And it resulted the number of restaurant that for one person increases.
>> As a result, the number of restaurants catering to single diners has increased.
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