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2013-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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issue a ticket : traffic signal violation ticket publication He is a violation of the signal. But He is not aware. He is make a polite apology. He's strictly follow the rules next time. Today is a sultry weather. But, In the afternoon, the rain may. I'm happy! nothing special. Today lunch is.... after class I will go to the bakery. I have acute indigestion and eat only what one wants. So, I make control menu. Very hard, I eat like food only.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in writing this. Keep it up! Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^issue a ticket : traffic signal violation ticket publication>> Issue a ticket: A traffic signal violation calls for an issuance of ticket.He is a violation of the signal.>> He violated the signal.But he is not aware.>> But he was not aware.He is make a polite apology.>> He apologized politely.He\'s strictly follow the rules next time.>> He will strictly follow the rules next time.Today is a sultry weather.>> Today we have a sultry weather.But, In the afternoon, the rain may.>> But it may rain in the afternoon.I\'m happy! nothing special.>> I\'m happy for no special reason.Today lunch is.... after class I will go to the bakery.>> I will go to the bakery after our class for my lunch today.I have acute indigestion and eat only what one wants.>> I have acute indigestion and I only eat what I want.So, I make control menu.>> So I control my food intake.Very hard, I eat like food only. >> It\'s very hard to eat only the food that I like.

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