7/4 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Our family are give someone to clothes that is no longer wears.
But these clothes must be clean and have not hole.
We donate clothes that is no longer wears to beautiful store.
The beautiful store means good for earth.
First working make daily necessities that is made recycle trashes.
And second working, It\'s sell reasonable price to people.
Finally the money through gain this working donate for our nature of earth.
If you have clothes no longer wear or things that is not using, why don\'t you donate that for our earth\'s future?
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] [이름]!
Never throw any clothing or fabric household items in the trash. Donate unwanted clothing to friends, charities, or thrift stores. Never donate wet or moldy items to charities or thrift stores. They will not clean or dry them, and they\'ll end up in a landfill.
- Kristine ^^
Our family are give someone to clothes that is no longer wears.
>> Our family donates unworn clothes to someone else.
But these clothes must be clean and have not hole.
>> These garments must be spotless and without holes.
We donate clothes that is no longer wears to beautiful store.
But these clothes must be clean and have not hole.
>> These garments must be spotless and without holes.
We donate clothes that is no longer wears to beautiful store.
>> We donate clothes that is no longer needed to Beautiful Store.
The beautiful store means good for earth.
The beautiful store means good for earth.
>> This store sells used clothes to help our environment.
First working make daily necessities that is made recycle trashes.
First working make daily necessities that is made recycle trashes.
>> First, they recycle old clothes to make it new and useful.
And second working, It\'s sell reasonable price to people.
And second working, It\'s sell reasonable price to people.
>> Then, they sell it with a reasonable price to people.
Finally the money through gain this working donate for our nature of earth.
Finally the money through gain this working donate for our nature of earth.
>> Finally, the profits from this store are donated to help the environment.
If you have clothes no longer wear or things that is not using, why don\'t you donate that for our earth\'s future?
If you have clothes no longer wear or things that is not using, why don\'t you donate that for our earth\'s future?
>> Why not donate any old clothes or things you no longer want to save the earth\'s future?
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