7.4 Homework :)

Hello there [이름] ^^

Thanks for doing your essay. ^^

I hope that you will have a wonderful week ahead of you.

It\'s nice that you have a sister that you can turn to. ^^

I am sure that you really love your sister. ^^

Oh! Psychological problem is not a good term to use. It is better to use just the word problem.

When we talk about psychological things, it means that a person has a mental problem/ illness.

I already made the corrections below. If you do have some questions, please ask me in class.

Teacher Nina

Is the question mean subjunctive mood?

>> Correct!

>> OR: Is the question means in a subjective mood?

Do I have to answer using of subjunctive mood?

>> Do I have to answer it in a subjective mood?

Or Is this essay is OK?

>> Correct!

/I turn to my sister if I have an emotional problem because she can understand and I can tell any problem which I cannot talk to my parents.

>> I turn to my sister if I have an emotional problem because she can understand and I can tell any problem which I cannot tell my parents.

My sister is one-year younger than me,so she\'s just like my old friend.

>> My sister is one year younger than me, so she\'s just like my friend.

My parents can\'t understand some problems and my feelings because they didn\'t experience the same things.

>> My parents can\'t understand some of problems and my feelings because they didn\'t experience the same things.

On the other hand, my sister can notice problems and understand easily because she usually experiences the same problems as mine.

>> Correct!

>> OR: On the other hand, my sister can notice problems and understand easily because she usually experiences the same things as I do.

In addition, parents are sometimes too worried about me and exaggerate my problems.

>> Correct!

I want to be consoled, but don\'t want to give worries to my parents.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I want to be consoled but I don\'t want my parents to be worried.

Therefore,It is more comfortable to tell the problem to my sister.

>> Correct!

>> OR: Therefore, I feel more comfortable in sharing my problems to my sister.

She also has more psychological hardiness than I have,so gives me energy to get over my emotional problem.

>> Did you mean: She has more problems than I do so this gives me the energy to get over my emotional problem.

I always thankful to my sister for listening to me.

>> Correct!

These days,I feel a little sorry because I think I depend on her too much.

>> These days, I feel sorry because I think I depend on her too much.