7/4 homework ( Charry)
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Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for promptly doing your homework.
I admire your diligence and patience.
I agree that big machines are scary.
I, for one, am scared of big trucks with big tires.
I have this irrational fear that if I get too close, the tires would run over me.
I think what you are feeling is normal.
Just don\'t forget to stay calm otherwise people would think that you\'re crazy.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a wonderful night.
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry ^^
I guess that what I fell afraid mostly is machine.
>> I guess what I am most afraid of is a machine.
Especially, For machines which have so many niddles and crane are.
>> I am especially afraid of machines that have so many needles and cranes.
When I see them, first of all I just started imagination they can suck my hand if I made mistaken and it let me so painful.
>> [Do you mean]: When I see them, I just start imagining those machines sucking my hand after an unfortunate incident and leave me in so much pain.
It make my thinking more deeply, even though It never happened in real.
>> It makes me think deeply even though it will never happen in real life.
It can show not a big deal for people, for me at least could be a thing motivated feeling scared as much as kind of phobia.
>> It might not be a big deal for people but for me, it gets me really scared to the point of phobia.
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