7/5 homework
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing me this composition. :)
Oh, I would love to go around the world as well.
I also want to see the beauty of each country and get to
experience their different cultures.
I hope we could at least find time and save enough cash to fulfill
any of this desires. ;D
See you!
Teacher Glenda
In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
What are the countries you want to visit? Give atleast 3 countries and why do you want to visit them.
< My answer>
I wnat (want)to visit many countries.
>> Correct
First, I want to visit Phillippine.
>> Philippines
Because, my friends told me Phillippin is very nice!
>> Because my friends told me that Philippines is very nice!
Second, I wnat to visit France.
>>
Beacause, I wnat (want) to go to the Eiffel Tower and Louver Museum.
>> Because,(want)
Finally, I wnat to visit Italy.
>> (want)
Because, I can eat many delicious foods!
>>Correct
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