7/5 homework

2017-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: What are the countries you want to visit? Give atleast 3 countries and why do you want to visit them. <My answer> I wnat to visit many countries. First, I want to visit Phillippine. Because, my friends told me Phillippin is very nice! Second, I wnat to visit France. Beacause, I wnat to go to the Eiffel Tower and Louver Museum. Finally, I wnat to visit Italy. Because, I can eat many delicious foods!

강사 첨삭


Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


Thank you for sharing me this composition. :)

Oh, I would love to go around the world as well.

I also want to see the beauty of each country and get to

experience their different cultures.

I hope we could at least find time and save enough cash to fulfill

any of this desires. ;D


See you!


Teacher Glenda 



In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
What are the countries you want to visit? Give atleast 3 countries and why do you want to visit them.

< My answer>
I wnat
(want)to visit many countries.

>> Correct
 First, I want to visit Phillippine.

>> Philippines
 Because, my friends told me Phillippin is very nice!

>> Because my friends told me that Philippines is very nice!
 Second, I wnat to visit France.

>>
 Beacause, I wnat (want) to go to the Eiffel Tower and Louver Museum.

>> Because,(want)

Finally, I wnat to visit Italy.

>> (want)
 Because, I can eat many delicious foods!

>>Correct

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