7.6 H.W !
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Lyn! Thank you for doing your homework. Having some time for ourselves is indeed the best! See you later! ~Teacher Elisha
Free time is an indicator of my happiness if I can distinguish and choose between good and evil.
>> Free time is an indicator of my happiness, if I can distinguish and choose between good and evil.
I think only in my free time, I can go anywhere and i can anything what i want to and i can meet someone who are i want to meet.
>> Only during my free time, I can go anywhere I want, do anything I want and meet someone I want to see.
Three years of work have made me realize that free time is a precious thing.
>> Three years of work had made me realize that free time is a precious thing.
I don\'t think there\'s anything that makes me as happy as my free time.
>> I don\'t think there\'s anything that could me as happy as my free time does.
So, i am spending happier time better than someone since i have quited my job.
>> I am having a happier time more than anyone after I quit my job.
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