7.6 Homework

Hi there! Good morning! Beautiful Monday to yoy, too! How do you humans affect the environment? Mordern conveniences always affect bad environment. The more conveniences we pursue, the worse the environment become. I think that the earth doesn't only belong to our generation. We are obligated to pass a good environment to next generation. I think this is our major responsibility. Thank you!

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thanks for sending your homework. I agree with what you said that it is our obligation to take care of our environment for the next generation. Anyway, please check some of my corrections. Enjoy your day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. Beautiful Monday to yoy, too! >> A beautiful Monday to you, too! How do you humans affect the environment?Mordern conveniences always affect bad environment. >> Modern conveniences always result to bad environment.  The more conveniences we pursue, the worse the environment become. >> The more conveniences we pursue, the worse the environment becomes. I think that the earth doesn\'t only belong to our generation. >> Correct. We are obligated to pass a good environment to next generation. >> We are obligated to pass a good environment to the next generation.I think this is our major responsibility. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.