7.6.Thu
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7.6.thu
Q: Do you think greetings are important? Why or Why not?
A: I think greetings are important. Because we greet each when we meet or part. When we meet, It is the first time of that time, so It can influence each’s first emotions. Also, when we part, It is the last time of that time, so It can affect each’s last emotions. Eventually, as greeting can do[이름]ate people’s emotion of that day, greetings are important.
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Hello Sandy!
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I think greetings are important.
>>CORRECT!
Because we greet each when we meet or part.
>>Because we greet each other whenever we meet or part.
When we meet, It is the first time of that time, so It can influence each’s first emotions.
>> When we meet, It\'s the first time in that moment so it can influence each other\'s initial emotions.
Also, when we part, It is the last time of that time, so It can affect each’s last emotions.
>> Also, when we part, it is the last time of that moment so it can affect as well each other\'s final emotions.
Eventually, as greeting can do[이름]ate people’s emotion of that day, greetings are important.
>> Eventually, greetings will do[이름]ate people\'s emotions of that day so I think greetings are important.
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