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2016-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

학생이 쓴 원문

Can you drive? No, I can't drive. If no, do you want to get a driver's license? Why or why not? Even though i want to get a driver's license, I can't get a driver's license^^ because I am 13 years old! In my country, we have to be an adult can have a driver's license. Do you think cars are safe? I think cars are not safe. But It safe than a motorcycle. Do people drive well in your country? maybe...^^ But often i hear the sound of horn...

강사 첨삭

Hello my dearest [이름]!  You have a good observation on cars in your country. Very observant you are! It actually makes you smarter if you observe a lot with what is happening around you. Especially with the right age of driving. Maybe, at the right age you will eventually get a driver\'s license. And I am more than happy to know that you know how to drive a car someday! Anyways, take note of the corrections on your sentence constructions and keep on practicing! Aja! See you!   Can you drive? No, I can\'t drive.>>>CORRECT.If no, do you want to get a driver\'s license? Why or why not?Even though i want to get a driver\'s license, I can\'t get a driver\'s license^^ because I am 13 years old! In my country, we have to be an adult can have a driver\'s license.>>> Even though I want to get a driver\'s license, I can\'t because I am just 13 years old now. We have an age limit in getting a driver\'s license. Do you think cars are safe?I think cars are not safe. But It safe than a motorcycle.>>> I think cars are not safe. (CORRECT.) >>> But cars are safer than a motorcycle. Do people drive well in your country?maybe...^^ But often i hear the sound of horn... >>> Maybe. I often hear the sound of horn so I\'m not really sure if people drive well here in my country. 

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