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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름],
Well said, Ms. [이름]! I have seen this from an interview of a married couple from a TV show here in the Philippines. One of them said that a relationship usually last longer if you have been friends first before you turn it to a romantic relationship. I guess that\'s true. Have a great weekend. See you on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, the most important friendship is husband and wife.
>> In my opinion, the most important friendship is between a husband and a wife.
In my case, I talk about a lot of things to my husband.
>> correct!
For example my working day, my friends, our children and many more.
>> correct!
So all husband and wife can become the lifelong friends.
>> So all husbands and wives could become lifelong friends.
Also I can have a friend until the day I die.
>> correct!
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