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It is interesting.
If my life is pre-planned before I were born, I won't try very hard.
I can be a great man despite I won't work very hard. (I want it because I am very lazy woman.)
I can't be a bad man despite I will work very hard.
So it is not good thinking.
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It is interesting.
>> correct!
If my life is pre-planned before I were born, I won\'t try very hard.
>> If my life is pre-planned before I was born, I won\'t try very hard.
I can be a great man despite I won\'t work very hard. (I want it because I am very lazy woman.)
>> I can be a great woman despite not working hard.
I can\'t be a bad man despite I will work very hard.
>> I can\'t be a bad woman despite not working very hard.
So it is not good thinking.
>> correct!
OR>> So that\'s not a good thing.
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