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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
There\'s no harm in dreaming. Many people think big and dream big for their future. That\'s okay. But of course, it shouldn\'t only be a dream. It should be coupled with hard work to realize those dreams. I hope you\'ll achieve at least one of your dreams. See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
If I won the lottery, I want a lot of things.
>> If I win the lottery, I want a lot of things.
First, I would check up my body in the hospital with my family.
>> First, I would go to the hospital with my family for a check up.
So I would cure it with my family for our future.
>> So we could immediately know if somebody is sick.
Second, I would travel in the world with my family for a long time. It is my dream for a long time.
>> Second, I would travel the world with my family for a long time. It has been my dream for a long time.
Finaly, I would buy a big building for my future.
>> Finally, I would buy a big building for our future.
However, I know it is just our dream.
>> However, I know it is just a dream.
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