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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I think that\'s normal. Parents have disagreements with their children and usually it\'s about the same thing. Lucky for me, I don\'t have to deal with that. (;
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I am very angry because of my eldest daughter.
>> correct!
She didn\'t keep promise with me.
>> She didn\'t keep her promise to me.
She also doesn\'t save time which is very valuable in our life.
>> She also doesn\'t save time which is very valuable in our lives.
She always makes me angry.
>> correct!
After that, I am sorry to her.
>> correct!
Everyday it happend again with my daughter and me.
>> This happens everyday with my daughter and me.
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