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학생이 쓴 원문
"There is no place like home"
I agree it.
During I travel, I sometimes miss my house.
However I always miss trip.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Summer is officially starting in your country. Go on trips. It doesn\'t have to be abroad. You can enjoy the beautiful places in your country too!
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
\"There is no place like home\"
>> correct!
I agree it.
>> I agree to it!
OR>> I completely agree!
During I travel, I sometimes miss my house.
>> Whenever I go traveling, I sometimes miss my home.
However I always miss trip.
>> However, I always miss going on trips.
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