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2017-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

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Good afternoon. I didn't do my homework because I was very busy. Thesedays I have a lot of work to do in my office because of my team leader. My team members have a lot of complants to him. But nobody doesn't tell him. He is too stubborn so he does not listen our opinion. I have a lot of stresses. I will tell him tomorrow our complants and our plan . I will try it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

I understand that you had a lot of things to do and you were not able to do your homework right away. No worries, I will always be here to help you and give you corrections if you need.
~~ Teacher Kathy.
Here are my corrections for you:
Good afternoon.
I didn\'t do my homework because I was very busy.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> I had no time to do my homework because I was very busy.
Thesedays I have a lot of work to do in my office because of my team leader.
>> These days I did a lot of work in my office because of our team leader.
My team members have a lot of complants to him.
>> My team members have a lot of complaints about him.
But nobody doesn\'t tell him.
>> But nobody wants to tell him.
He is too stubborn so he does not listen our opinion.
>> He is very stubborn and he doesn\'t want to listen to our opinions.
I have a lot of stresses.
>> I am in a lot of stress.
OR:
>> I have been in a lot of stress lately.
I will tell him tomorrow our complants and our plan .
>> I will tell him tomorrow our complaints and our plan.
I will try it.
>> I will try my best.

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