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2017-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

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OMG! I can't believe it. I believe my best friend. But if my best friend stole my something I first ask her and then I will listen to her answer and then I will believe her answer. Because if she lie me maybe there are something the reason.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],
Thank you for sending your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
OMG!
>> Correct!
>> Oh my gosh!
>> Geez!
I can\'t believe it. I believe my best friend.
>> I don\'t like to believe that my best friend can do something like that.
But if my best friend stole my something I first ask her and then I will listen to her answer and then I will believe her answer.
>> But if she does, I will ask her why she did it. I will listen to her answer and will forgive her.
Because if she lie me maybe there are something the reason.
>> Because there might be a reason for why she did that.

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