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In my case, I want to care my skin.
I already have a lot of wrinkle.
I am sad. I don't want to be old.
If I would have a lot of wrinkle, I will plastic surgery.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Koreans are known also for their skin-care products. How many products do you use to take care of your face and your skin?
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
In my case, I want to care my skin.
>> In my case, I want to care for my skin.
I already have a lot of wrinkle.
>> I already have a lot of wrinkles.
I am sad. I don\'t want to be old.
>> correct!
If I would have a lot of wrinkle, I will plastic surgery.
>> If I would have a lot of wrinkles, I will do plastic surgery.
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