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강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)
That\'s right Ms. [이름], a change should happen right now. But the problem is I think change is happening very slowly. We shouldn\'t lose hope though.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I am not a leader now.
>> correct!
I want to be the leader but it is not easy in Korea.
>> correct!
I mention before, most supervisors don\'t want women to be a leader.
>> correct!
I don\'t know why.
>> correct!
It is a big problem in the world.
>> correct!
A few days ago, I watched the news on the internet.
>> correct!
Most people are paid monthly but most women are not paid enough more than men.
>> Most people are paid monthly but most women are not paid as much as men.
It must change for our future and our children.
>> correct!
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