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학생이 쓴 원문
I' have a three job.
1. Radiological
2. Fitness Trainer(Of learning)
3. Convenience store cashier
I rest on public holidays.
I'm very happy.
I' had maximum six job.
Then, very tired.
So, I am reduced of work.
I' think i'm Workaholic.
I' not work I' nervous.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I wonder about what you did last weekend. I bet you had a good time! Take care and see you in class!
T. JanE ^^I\' have a three job.1. Radiological2. Fitness Trainer(Of learning)3. Convenience store cashier>> My three jobs include Radiologist, Fitness Trainer, and a Cashier in a Convenience Store.I rest on public holidays.>> Correct I\'m very happy.>> Correct I\' had maximum six job.>> I had a maximum of six jobs.Then, very tired.>> I was very tired then.So, I am reduced of work.>> So, I reduced the number of my jobs.I think I\'m workaholic.>> Correct I\' not work I\' nervous.
>> I feel nervous when I don\'t work.
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