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2013-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I' have a three job. 1. Radiological 2. Fitness Trainer(Of learning) 3. Convenience store cashier I rest on public holidays. I'm very happy. I' had maximum six job. Then, very tired. So, I am reduced of work. I' think i'm Workaholic. I' not work I' nervous.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I wonder about what you did last weekend. I bet you had a good time! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^I\' have a three job.1. Radiological2. Fitness Trainer(Of learning)3. Convenience store cashier>> My three jobs include Radiologist, Fitness Trainer, and a Cashier in a Convenience Store.I rest on public holidays.>> Correct I\'m very happy.>> Correct I\' had maximum six job.>> I had a maximum of six jobs.Then, very tired.>> I was very tired then.So, I am reduced of work.>> So, I reduced the number of my jobs.I think I\'m workaholic.>> Correct I\' not work I\' nervous. >> I feel nervous when I don\'t work.

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