7.8 Homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
We can get useful things from fiction because there are lessons and imagination in fiction.First of all,we are able to learn lessons about life from fiction.Although fiction is literally not real but actually is based on real life.The contents of it are difficulties,happiness,sadness,relationships of people such as family,friends,couples.It is possible that we experience these or similar things.We can know how to solve problem or get consolation and courage after reading events and positive characters.On a second thought,fiction is a reduction of life itself.Moreover,it can be also useful even if the fiction is so imaginative and far from the present life like SF.SF gives unique and creative ideas to us.Some Scientists drew inspiration from SF and made great inventions.Also,imagination in fiction sometimes predicts the future and warn to human beings.For example,the movie titled "Tomorrow" emphasized importance of protecting environment.Therefore,fictitious books can be helpful for us.
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We can get useful things from fiction because there are lessons and imagination in fiction.
>> Did you mean: We can get useful things from fiction because there are lessons and it will make our imagination wider.
>> OR: Fiction is really helpful because we can learn lessons from it and it makes our imagination wider.
First of all,we are able to learn lessons about life from fiction.
>> Correct
>> OR: First, we can learn lessons about life from it.
Although fiction is literally not real but actually is based on real life.
>> Although fiction is literally not real, it is actually based on real life story.
The contents of it are difficulties,happiness,sadness,relationships of people such as family,friends,couples.
>> Correct
>> OR: The contest of it are difficulties, happiness, sadness, relationships pf people such as family, friends and couples.
It is possible that we experience these or similar things.
>> Did you mean: It is possible that we experience these things or similar to this.
We can know how to solve problem or get consolation and courage after reading events and positive characters.
>> Did you mean: We can know how to solve problem or get consoled and courage after reading events and positive characters.
On a second thought,fiction is a reduction of life itself.
>> Correct
Moreover,it can be also useful even if the fiction is so imaginative and far from the present life like SF.
>> Moreover, it can be also useful even if fiction is so imaginative and far from the present life like SF.
SF gives unique and creative ideas to us.
>> Correct
Some Scientists drew inspiration from SF and made great inventions.
>> Correct
Also,imagination in fiction sometimes predicts the future and warn to human beings.
>> Also, imagination in fiction sometimes predicts the future and warn human beings.
For example,the movie titled \"Tomorrow\" emphasized importance of protecting environment.
>> For example. the movie titled \"Tomorrow\" emphasized the importance of protecting environment.
Therefore,fictitious books can be helpful for us.
>> Correct
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