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Happy Tuesday, Lyn! I agree with you, men and women are different when it comes to expressing their emotions. Women are more emotional than men, haha! Enjoy the rest of the day, Lyn! You did great here! See you! ~Teacher Elisha
I don\'t know what men do when they\'re angry.
>> CORRECT!
To be exact, I think it\'s more like i don\'t understand.
>> CORRECT!
or:
>> To be exact, I think it\'s more like I don\'t understand.
Because in women case, women show their angry on the surface.
>> In cases of women, they show their anger on the surface.
or:
>> Women show their emotions physically.
And women tend to solve with conversation about the context of the situation.
>> Women tend to solve their problems by talking about the context of the situation.
But men tend to get angry only at the time and not talk or not share empathy anymore and dosen\'t try to solve it cerrainly.
>> Men tend to get angry when bad things happen but then they won\'t talk nor share what they feel about it and they don\'t solve their problems rationally.
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