7.9 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?
Most of all, I think that speaking English skill is very important for us in order to be successful in the world today. Because the world is getting closer due to globalization. I have been learning English for about two years with you so that I can be a good English speaker. I always appreciate you in all aspects. I think you are a very considerate person in teaching.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the importance of English especially in the world today. I also appreciate your effort in doing your part to improve your skills. Good job!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?Most of all, I think that speaking English skill is very important for us in order to be successful in the world today.
>> Correct.
Because the world is getting closer due to globalization.
>> Correct.
I have been learning English for about two years with you so that I can be a good English speaker.
>> Correct.
I always appreciate you in all aspects.
>> Correct.
I think you are a very considerate person in teaching.
>> I think you are a very considerate person when teaching.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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