7. 9 Homework

2018-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. What can you say about this? I don't like to change something. I know changes for good direction are essential but when I change something, my energe is used. If I think 'Oh, I want to learn how to play the guitar, it takes about 6 months to learn really. Because learning how to play the guitar is also a little change in my life. I think change can be beneficial but very stressful and challanging to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

See you tomorrow. ^^

- Blair

I don\'t like to change something. I know changes for good direction are essential but when I change something, my energe is used. If I think \'Oh, I want to learn how to play the guitar, it takes about 6 months to learn really. Because learning how to play the guitar is also a little change in my life. I think change can be beneficial but very stressful and challanging to me.

In my own opinion, I don\'t like changes. I know changes are essential for individual\'s growth but when I change something, my energy is consumed. Whenever I plan to do something, like learn how to play the guitar, it takes for about 6 months to study, and learning how to play is also a change in my life. Changes are beneficial but it could also be stressful, challenging, and time consuming for me.

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