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>> Where would you want to go for your next vacation? Why?
I would like to go to vietnam for my next vacation. I yearn to go there this winter. The main reason is that i want to eat two kinds of foods, rice noodle and mango. And also, i can enjoy logement or buying something in lower price because there price is much lower than korea.
I can feel the local taste of the rice noodle which can eat in only vietnam. Besides, i can enjoy eating a lot of mangoes because mangoes in korea are costly. Most of all, my vietnamese friend recommended me try all sorts of street foods. she said to me that it will become a new experience. I have ever seen many people sitting in small chair and enjoy eating in street on TV. So, i want to experience absolutely all of these things.
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>> Where would you want to go for your next vacation? Why?
I would like to go to vietnam for my next vacation.
>> I would like to go to Vietnam on my next vacation.
I yearn to go there this winter.
>> correct
The main reason is that i want to eat two kinds of foods, rice noodle and mango.
>> correct
And also, i can enjoy logement or buying something in lower price because there price is much lower than korea.
>>>> Also, I can enjoy buying something at a lower price because it much cheaper there than in Korea.
I can feel the local taste of the rice noodle which can eat in only vietnam. Besides, i can enjoy eating a lot of mangoes because mangoes in korea are costly.
>>>> I can feel the local taste in the rice noodles, which can be experienced only in Vietnam. Besides, I can enjoy eating a lot of mangoes because this fruit is costly in Korea.
Most of all, my vietnamese friend recommended me try all sorts of street foods. she said to me that it will become a new experience.
>>>> Most of all, my Vietnamese friend recommended that I try all sorts of street foods. She said to me that it will become a new experience.
I have ever seen many people sitting in small chair and enjoy eating in street on TV. So, i want to experience absolutely all of these things.
>>>> I have never seen on TV many people sitting in small chairs and enjoying eating on the streets. So I absolutely want to experience all of these things.
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