7.9 My sentence #1

1. about soccer
In fact I dont know about Korean-league soccers well.

>> In fact, I dont know about Korean-league soccer well.

or

>> In fact, I don\'t know well about Korean-League soccer.

However I know about by watching 2018 russia world cup.

>> However, I knew about it by watching the 2048 Russia world cup.

Especially I think so good play that the German vs Korea.

>> Especially, the goo game played in the Germany vs Korea match.

This game was very interesting and amazing.

>> Correct

The german team was the world no.1. Beacause korean team was win. Is it really???
>> The German Team was the world\'s no. 1 but Korean won.


2.\" Do you think it will be more or less important to have a good education in the future?

\" Yes, I think good education is very important. In the future, Education of language and computre will be more important.

>> Yes, I think good education is very important. In the future, Language Education and computer will be more important.

I think the world more and more do not boundaries.

>> I think, the world is getting no more boundaries.

For example, Although I live not U.S.A We can buy U.s.a goods to Amazon website.

>> For example, though I don\'t live in the US, we can still buy US good in Amazon website.

Thus We have to study languages others countries.

>> Thus, we have to study the languages of other countries.

Especially we need to english education of good because English is common languages.

>> Most specially, we need English language education because English is a universal language.  

The computer language is basically english too. So I will think good education need more.

>> So I will think we need good education more.