7.9 My sentence #2
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
1.Can we really survive without eating meat products?
Yes, It posiible but like a sad. Thesedays I am dieater.
>> Yes, it\'s possible but it will be sad. These days, I\'m on a diet.
So I didn\'t eat to meat and I eating to raw carrots and sweetpotatos for 4days.
>> So, I don\'t eat meat and I just eat raw carrots an sweet potatoes for 4 days now.
I like a chicken food but I dont eat.
>> I like chicken but I don\'t eat it now.
So I feel gloomy a little but I am loosing weight 3kg. I think if I vegetarian, I am semi-vegetarian.
>> So I feel a bit gloomy but I lost 3kg. I think I\'m a semi-vegetarian
I will eat to milk and chicken and fishes instead of meat.
>> I drink milk and eat chicken and fish instead of meat.
There are many kinds of Vegetarians. so they will can live not eat to meat.
>> There are many kinds of vegetarian. So they can live without eating meat.
2.What is your favorite hobby these days?
What am I crazy about these days?
>> Correct
Thesedays My hobby is watching Tv. Especially I watching U.S.A drama of suits series. And I crazy for actors in suits series.
>> These days, my hobby is watching TV. Especially, US drama of suit series. I\'m crazy with the actors in the series.
They so attractive and so nice. And These days I swmming because hot weather.
>> They are so attractive and so nice. And these days, I like swimming because of the hot weather.
The swimming makes healing and healthy to me.
>> Swimming makes healing and healthy to me.
Ususally I swimming in the afternoon.
>> I usually swim in the afternoon.
I swimming for a thime that my son went to the day care center. This is my life these days.
>> I go swimming when my son goes to the day care center.
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