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How can you stay healthy?
I can stay healthy to eat vitamins.
And I go to bed early. So I\'m getting enough rest for stay healty.
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I am happy that you consider resting as an important factor to be healthy, Sophie!-Faith-
How can you stay healthy?>> CORRECT
I can stay healthy to eat vitamins.
>> I can stay healthy by taking vitamins.
And I go to bed early. So I\'m getting enough rest for stay healty.
I can stay healthy to eat vitamins.
>> I can stay healthy by taking vitamins.
And I go to bed early. So I\'m getting enough rest for stay healty.
>> Also, I go to bed early, so that I can get enough rest to stay healthy.
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