71. Homework

Hello there, Jason^^

I think that life purely depends on our perception

If an optimistic person views life, he always sees it perfectly; whereas a negative person only sees the drastic things.

Have a great day, see you!

ESSAY: Is life a struggle or is it a pleasant walk?
>>CORRECT!
I think that is a kind of philosophic question.

>>I think that is a kind of philosophic a question.

So it is little bit hard for answering it.

>>So it is little bit hard to answer it.

Therefore, I just make an example for explaining it.
>>Therefore, I just made an example to explain it. 
Just for an example, a person see snowing and it is awesome for him.

>>Just for an example, a person sees snow, and it is awesome for him.

Thus, he would like to run into the snowing.

>>Thus, he would like to run into it.

 But he is not able to be good at running on the iced ground because it is too slippery.

>> But he is not able to run on the iced ground well, because it is too slippery.

Hence, he falls down a lot of times thus he sees blood and bruise.

>>Hence, he falls down a lot of times; thus, he sees blood and bruises.

 At the same time, he would think that life is a struggle for him.

>>CORRECT!

However, he doesn’t give it up and tries to find how to bear suffering and the way to enjoy it in the deep of anguish.

>>However, he doesn’t give up and tries to find how to bear the suffering and a way to enjoy in spite of anguish.
 Finally, he knows how to control his feet on the ice and handle his body well running on the slippery ground as a skating.

>>Finally, he knows how to control his feet on ice and handle his body well running on the slippery ground like skating.

And then he figures that life is good such as feeling like a pleasant walk.
>>And then he figures that life is good like a pleasant walk.
I\'m not sure that I clearly understand the sentence that you asked me.

>>I\'m not sure whether I clearly understand the sentence that you asked me.

But I just would like to say that life is a pleasant walk when I compare it with that life is struggle.

>>CORRECT!