75. Homework
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I definitely agree with you, Jason^^
We are definitely influenced by the people who we spend more time with.
No matter how we consciously think about it, it just happens spontaneously.
Have a great day!
ESSAY: Boys are most influenced by their fathers and girls are most influenced by their mothers. Do you agree or disagree?
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I think just their appearance is influenced by their parents.
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That’s because only their genes come from their parents.
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So I guess that children are influenced by their parent who spends more time with and who talks more with.
>>So I guess that children are influenced by their parent who they spend more time with and talk more with.
An example, my characteristic was influenced by my mother since I spend my time with her more than father.
>>As an example, my characteristic was influenced by my mother since I spend my time with her more than father.
She always taught me that I have to wash dishes after eating foods, how to clean a room well, and how to cook soup, rice, and some meals.
>>She always taught me that I have to wash dishes after eating food, how to clean a room well, and how to cook soup, rice, and some meals.
And she said that my generation might not same as before so I must know how to adjust or handle with my future wife.
>>And she said that my generation might not be the same as before, so I must know how to adjust to or handle my future wife.
Hence, most of times, I clean a table and wash dishes as soon as possible after having meals.
>>Hence, most of the times I clean a table and wash dishes as soon as possible after having meals.
Furthermore, I try to listen carefully as possible as I can and I try to change my mistakes if I made it since I don\'t want to make any trouble with others.
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Anyways, I don\'t know how to make to be ending this writing.
>> Anyways, I don\'t know how to end this writing.
I just don’t agree boys are most influenced by their fathers and girls are most influenced by their mothers.
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