76. Homework
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Thank you for your explanation in detail, Jason^^
I think love involves accepting a person and sacrificing many things for their happiness, too~
Have a great day, see you^^
ESSAY: This is a very general topic; however, I hope to know your idea about this. What is love? How do you know it exists?
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When my ex-girlfriends asked me that \'do you love me?\' then I couldn\'t answer to her since I always get confused about what is different between love and like.
>>When my ex-girlfriends asked me that \"Do you love me?\", I couldn\'t answer her since I always get confused about what is difference between love and like.
Hence, at first, I define love and like from an article that I have read through the internet.
>>Hence, at first, I define about love and like from an article that I have read through the internet.
\'Like\' means I wish that I become happy owing to the girl.
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And \'Love\' means I wish making that the girl becomes happy because of me.
>> And \'love\' means I wish to make that girl becomes happy because of me.
‘Like’ is same as a word ‘Greed’ but ‘Love’ is same as a word ‘Give’.
>>Like’ is same as the word ‘greed’, but ‘love’ is same as the word \"give\".
So, if a person takes flowers in the yard to bring his room, it means he likes that flower.
>>So, if a person takes flowers in the yard to bring to his room, it means he likes that flower.
But, if a person just pours water to give flowers nutrition, it means he loves that flower.
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‘I like you’ is a flutter to hear it, and ‘I love you’ is tears to hear it.
>>‘I like you’ is a flutter to hear, whereas ‘I love you’ is tears to hear.
‘Like’ means I hope that she would have suffering if she is not able to with me.
>>‘Like’ means I hope that she would have suffering if she is not able to be with me.
However, ‘Love’ means I hope that she would become happy even if she is not able to with me.
>> However, ‘love’ means I hope that she would become happy even if she cannot be with me.
There are a lot of different definitions about ‘Love’ and ‘Like’.
>>There are a lot of different definitions about ‘love’ and ‘like’.
And I figure I have never felt in love with someone yet due to those definitions that I read and mentioned.
>>And I figure I have never fallen in love with someone yet due to those definitions that I read and mentioned.
That’s because I used to calculate what I had to do for her when we were having a relationship.
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I just know love is exists in the world since there are so many people fall in love even if it’s dangerous.
>>I just know love exists in the world since there are so many people fall in love even if it’s dangerous.
And they can’t stop love their lover although they already knew it’s not good for them and their companions told them it’s not good way so they persuaded them to stop the relationship.
>> And they can’t stop loving their lover although they already knew it’s not good for them, and their companions told them it’s not a good way so they persuaded them to stop the relationship.
Although they lose their time, money, health, and etc…, I just admire them.
>>Although they lose their time, money, health, and etc., I just admire them.
That’s because I think when someone fall in love with someone then they are not afraid of the other things since they only concentrate to their lover.
>> That’s because I think when someone falls in love with someone, they are not afraid of the other things since they only concentrate on their lover.
And in my opinion, it would be kind of true love which I have never been into yet.
>>And in my opinion, it would be a kind of true love which I have never been into yet.
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