76. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you very much for doing this, Jason~
I am so glad you found the right supplement for you.
See you on Monday^^
ESSAY: Describe a material thing you own which is very important to you.
>>CORRECT!
I feel tired nowadays owing to a hard working so I bought medicine at drug store that is located in front of my house.
>>I feel tired nowadays owing to a hard work, so I bought medicine at a drug store that is located in front of my house.
It looks quite gorgeous due to the golden cover.
>>CORRECT!
On the label, they put its name ‘B-max’ and it has much kind of elements such as Vitamin C, B, Benfotiamine, Ursodeoxycholic acid and etc.
>>On the label, they put its name ‘B-max’ and it has many kinds of elements such as Vitamin C, B, Benfotiamine, Ursodeoxycholic acid and etc.
When I read instruction in the box, it shows it helps a person who has muscle pain, joint pain, neuralgia, stomatitis, eye strain, physical fatigue or decreased fitness.
>>When I read the instruction on the box, it shows it helps a person who has muscle pain, joint pain, neuralgia, stomatitis, eye strain, physical fatigue or decreased fitness.
And I have problems that eye strain, physical fatigue.
>>And I have problems such as eye strain and physical fatigue.
Furthermore, I had gotten hard time for waking up in the morning.
>>Furthermore, I had a hard time waking up in the morning.
But after I have been taking it, I get up on time without any tired feeling.
>>But after taking it, I get up on time without any tired feeling.
Hence, it’s important for me since it reduces my body stress well that I think.
>>Hence, it’s important for me since it reduces my body stress better than I think.
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ESSAY: Can people ever be truly original?
>>CORRECT!
I can\'t understand this question clearly so I am afraid of writing it.
>>CORRECT!
If the question means same with the sentence \'can people ever be truly inventive?\', than I would say that people are creative since plenty of things that are useful for human have been made by human.
>>If the question means same with the sentence ,\'Can people ever be truly inventive?\', then I would say that people are creative since plenty of things that are useful for humans have been made by humans.
And we will make more for the convenience.
>>As a result, it creates more convenience.
I have no idea for the answering it so I am going to finish writing it.
>> I have no idea to answer it, so I am going to finish it.
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