77. Homework

Oh, so this one revolves around progress in automobile technology!

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ESSAY: Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good?
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I don’t agree that progress is always good.
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For example, engineers wanted to reduce damage of human life at driving.
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So, they inventoried Auto Parking system which is useful for an inexperienced driver since they just press button only for the parking and this system does parking safety automatically, Reversing Sensors which are ringing when something is approached to their car at the back side, Active Brake Assist and Adaptive Cruise Control which are a kind of program using installed sensors and make car stopped or slowed when something is approached their setting values automatically and etc.
>>So, they invented Auto Parking system which is useful for an inexperienced driver since they just press the button only for the parking and this system does parking safety automatically, Reversing Sensors which are ringing when something approaches their car at the back side, Active Brake Assist and Adaptive Cruise Control which are a kind of program using installed sensors and make car stopped or slowed when something approaches their setting values automatically and etc.
Those progressed systems are helpful for drivers furthermore it is totally helpful from the unexpected accident while they are driving.
>>Those progressed systems are helpful for drivers; furthermore, it is totally helpful in accidents while they are driving.
However, this progress have car price increased and they are not able to choose other options since it is kind of a package items.
>>However, this progress has car price increased and they are not able to choose other options since it is a kind of a packaged item.
Besides, people tend to rely on those safety systems so their driving skills might be not as good as elder drivers.
>>Besides, people tend to rely on those safety systems, so their driving skills might be not as good as elder drivers.
In addition, they must take disadvantages such as maintenance parts increased since it has a lot of installed sensors.

>>In addition, they must take the disadvantages such as maintenance parts increase since it has a lot of installed sensors.

Thus, they might spend money more for the after services about fixing or checking their car status.

>>Thus, they might spend more money for the after services like fixing or checking their car status.
When a sensor is broken, accordingly, other sensors will not work due to the connected programming.

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That\'s why they might need to use money making it operate well.
>>That\'s why they might need to use money to operate it well.
As a result, progresses have a lot of advantages but it is not always good since, sometimes, it brings unexpected bad way.

>>As a result, progresses have a lot of advantages but it is not always good since, sometimes, it brings unexpected bad things.
Hence, I disagree

>>Hence, I disagree .