78. Homework

Oh~ I did not know that height is also related with how other people treat their fellowmen.

Thank you for this, Jason, have a great day!

ESSAY: Describe an event that changed your life forever.
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My height is not reached an average in Korea.

>>My height does not reach the average in Korea.
And I think it has partly made my attitude and characteristic.

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 So, I am going to write some bad habits that changed my height forever.
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First, when I was in an elementary school, I had received milk every single early morning in the school.

>>First, when I was in elementary school, I had received milk every single morning at school.
 I don’t know whether that milk was given us for free or not.

>> I don’t know whether that milk was given to us for free or not.
 Anyways, I didn’t like to drink milk at that time so I used to throw it to the outside of window in the class.
>> Anyways, I didn’t like to drink milk at that time so I used to throw it outside the window in the class.
Second, when I was in a middle school, I used to play computer games instead of sleeping at the late night.

>>Second, when I was in middle school, I used to play computer games instead of sleeping at night.
 Hence, most of the times, I went to bed after 12 pm.

>>Hence, most of the time, I went to bed after 12 midnight.

Regarding of that, I have read some articles on the internet about height.

>>Regarding that, I have read some articles on the internet about height.
 In the article, students should go to bed before 10 pm if they want to be tall since growth hormone are making while they are sleeping after 10 pm.

>>In the article, students should go to bed before 10 pm if they want to be tall since growth hormone is produced while they are sleeping after 10 pm.

However, sadly, I didn’t.
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If I had used to drink that milk and had gone to sleep before 10 pm, I might have become taller than now.
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However, if I were taller than now, I just guess my characteristic would have been changed.

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 That\'s because I might look down others around me due to the tall height and it would be reflected in my behavior.

>> That\'s because I might look down on others around me due to the tall height and it would be reflected in my behavior.
 For the reason, more than half of people who have big body and tall height when others saw them have little bit rude attitude based on my experiences.

>> For that reason, more than half of  the people who have a big body and tall height have little bit rude attitude when others saw them based on my experiences.
 I am not telling it all the people have same personality but it\'s just kind of possibility.

>> I am not telling that all people have the same personality but it\'s just a kind of possibility.
 Thus, if I were taller than now, I also might be rude to the others. 

>> Thus, if I were taller than now, I also might be rude to others. 
 Therefore, I am just satisfied with this height and characteristic since it gives me how to respect neighbors.

>> Therefore, I am just satisfied with this height and characteristic since it allows me to respect neighbors.