79. Homework

Thank you very much for this, Jason^^

I think apartments are great, for they offer a lot of convenient services to the residents.

Have a great day!

ESSAY: In many cities, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages than disadvantages?
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I think living in large apartment blocks has more advantages than disadvantages.

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 If they are as rich as high rank into 5% in their country, then living in private house would be better.

>> If they are as rich as the 5% of the richest population in their country, then living in a private house would be better.

But in my opinion, most of them are not into 5% so living in apartment is better choice.
>>But in my opinion, most of them are not in that 5%, so living in an apartment is a better choice.
First, it is more safety than private house since safety guards who is hired by the people living in an apartment are located in front of each gates to keep their area from the strangers.

>>First, it is safer than a private house since security guards who are hired by the people living in an apartment are in front of each gates to keep their area from the strangers.

 Moreover, they installed automatic open-close gate for the security.

>>Moreover, they installed automatic gates for security.

So, when they want to enter, they need to input passwords at the entrance gates.

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And a lot of CCTV has installed in their apartment.
>>And a lot of CCTVs have been installed in their apartment.
Second, people who is living in an apartment don’t need to find a parking lot.

>>Second, people who are living in an apartment don’t need to find a parking lot.

That’s because the apartment has already designed enough spaces for the cars.

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Besides, the apartments have being built included basement garage nowadays.

>>Besides, the apartments have included basement garage nowadays.

Thus, while they are going to take the car, they are not gotten wet even if the weather is rain or snow.

>>Thus, while they are going to take the car, they do not get wet even if the weather is rainy or snowy.
That\'s because they just go out from their house, next press the elevator button, and go to the B1 to B5 where they parked the car to get it and it those are covered by the ground level.
>>That\'s because they just go out from their house,  press the elevator button, and go to B1 to B5 where they parked the car to get it and it, especially for those are covered by the ground level.
Third, people are easily able to get to the plenty of convenience facilities.

>>Third, people can easily get to the plenty of convenient facilities.
 Nowadays, the apartment style is included such as convenience store, gym, restaurant and pet house at the ground until third floor.
>>Nowadays, apartment styles have included amenities such as store, gym, restaurant and pet house at the ground until third floor.
Anyways, I can\'t find any disadvantages just now since engineers have been improved it with various technologies for the convenience.

>> Anyways, I can\'t find any disadvantages nowadays, since engineers have improved it with various technologies for the convenience.

In the conclusion, I think living in apartment gives a lot of advantages.

>>In conclusion, I think living in apartment gives a lot of advantages.