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Q:Persuade the co-teacher who doesn't want to go on a school trip instead of regular class for some reasons. First, it is burdensome for teachers. Second, we already have regular class. If we go out for a day, we have to change the regular curiculum and it is a lot of works.
A: I understand that you think it is quite burden that we go out instead of a regular class. But there are some good things if we do that. First of all, we have the students experience the real knowledge. When they just sit in the classroom and imagine what would like be in an actual society, it makes them dull and bored. Second of all, if there are a lot of work to change the curriculum, I can help you with that. I have an experience of that area, so I can help. From these points, we should go out for a day and have a fun.
Homework
1.on, 2.of,with,at, 3.by, 4.On,for, 5.at,of
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Q:Persuade the co-teacher who doesn\'t want to go on a school trip instead of regular class for some reasons.
>>CORRECT!First, it is burdensome for teachers.
>>CORRECT!
Second, we already have regular class.
>>CORRECT!
If we go out for a day, we have to change the regular curiculum and it is a lot of works.
>>If we go out for a day, we have to change the regular curriculum and it is a lot of work.A: I understand that you think it is quite burden that we go out instead of a regular class.
>>I understand that you think it is quite burdensome that we go out instead of a regular class.
But there are some good things if we do that. >>CORRECT!
First of all, we have the students experience the real knowledge.>>First of all, we have the students experience real knowledge.
When they just sit in the classroom and imagine what would like be in an actual society, it makes them dull and bored.
>>When they just sit in the classroom and imagine what it would be like in an actual society, it makes them dull and bored.
Second of all, if there are a lot of work to change the curriculum, I can help you with that.
>>CORRECT!
I have an experience of that area, so I can help.
>>CORRECT!
From these points, we should go out for a day and have a fun.
>>CORRECT!Homework1.on, 2.of,with,at, 3.by, 4.On,for, 5.at,of
Answers: 1. on 2. of, of, at, 3. by, 4. In, by 5. In, by
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