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I didn’t review and preview anything for the last weekend.
I just watched on TV. I know that's a really meaningless to me.
But, It's not easy to change my lifestyle especially after working. It's the same thing as a my student days.
I just wish and not to try to do it. That's my problem.
I'll try and try to do what I want without giving up.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It뭩 okay I understand your situation but just try to read even if it is for 15 minutes everyday but if you cannot make it then you can also do it for 5 minutes just review for the lesson the next day. Well, I hope that you will be able to do that. See you tomorrow!
T.Faye
Here are your corrections:
I didn’t review and preview anything for the last weekend.
>>I didn뭪 review anything during the weekend.I just watched on TV.
>>I just watched TV.
I know that's a really meaningless to me.>>I know that뭩 really meaningless.
But, It's not easy to change my lifestyle especially after working.
>>Correct!
It's the same thing as a my student days.>>It뭩 the same as my student days.
I just wish and not to try to do it.
>>I just wish and try to do it.
That's my problem. >>Correct!
I'll try and try to do what I want without giving up.
>>Correct!
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