7th november 2012
학생이 쓴 원문
7th November 2012
I don't have much work to do these day. So I have lots of free time.
I hope that this condition will be remain for a long time.
The condition is good opportunity for me.
I will prepare to somethings for a new project.
The other days, My wife told me. She wants to runs of day care center.
Of course, I would like to run about that.
But we need to much money in order to operate of day care center.
Now, I haven't enough money for run its.
So, I still worried about that.
First, I am going to rend a money from someone or bank by this weekend.
I will try to run of day care center. If I possible.
I will pray to rend a money.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Chopper! I\'m very impressed with your idea in running a day care center.^^
I hope you and your wife will push through in operating one.^^
I also hope to see the day care if it\'s finish. I know you can do it Chopper.
See you again later and I would love to talk about it.^^
-----T. Anne
7th November 2012
>> 7th of November, 2012I don\'t have much work to do these day.
>> I don\'t have much work to do today.
So I have lots of free time.>> That\'s the reason I have lots of free time.
I hope that this condition will be remain for a long time.>> I hope that this condition will remain for a long time.
The condition is good opportunity for me.>> The situation is a good opportunity for me.
I will prepare to somethings for a new project.>> I will prepare some things for a new project.
The other days, My wife told me. She wants to runs of day care center.
>> The other day, my wife told me that she wants to run a day care center.
Of course, I would like to run about that.>> Of course, I would like to run that kind of business.
But we need to much money in order to operate of day care center.>> But we will need too much money in order to operate a day care center.
Now, I haven\'t enough money for run its.>> Right now, I don\'t have enough money to start.
So, I still worried about that.>> I\'m still worried about it.
First, I am going to rend a money from someone or bank by this weekend.>> First, I\'m going to barrow money from someone or the bank in the weekend.
I will try to run of day care center. If I possible.>> If possible, I will try to opearate a day care center.
I will pray to rend a money.
>> I will pray that I will be able to barrow money.
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