8.1 Homework :)

2014-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It is difficult for me to make decisions about important things.It takes a long time because I think the possible effects of my decision carefully.Acually, speaking of the dark side,I'm more of a indecisive person.Sometimes I spend too much time on hesitating and lose a good opportunity.Then I regret why I couldn't make a decision earlier.Even worse,the consequence can be totally different from what I expected even though I had a hard time determining things.On a second thought,however,it is natural that making an important decision makes people nervous.But excessive anxiety doesn't help us decide in a right direction,so I'm trying to loosen up a bit when I make decisions./If I leave a few minutes later,I have to wait a bus.Then,because I transfer from the bus to the subway,I may miss the right time to get on the subway./You're supposed to finish this task by today./I don't get why she doesn't clean up after herself./It seems like ages since I last traveled Europe./It was a tough day.

강사 첨삭

Happy second day of the week [이름]^^ Thanks for your essay! I am impressed with your sentences. ^^ Keep it up! I do understand why some people can make decisions easily. ^^ Thanks for your wonderful ideas. ^^ Talk to you tomorrow. Have a great night. Teacher Nina   It is difficult for me to make decisions about important things. >> Correct It takes a long time because I think the possible effects of my decision carefully. >> It takes a long time because I think about the possible effects of my decisions carefully. Acually, speaking of the dark side,I\'m more of a indecisive person. >> Correct Sometimes I spend too much time on hesitating and lose a good opportunity. >> Sometimes I spend too much time on hesistating and lose good opportunities. Then I regret why I couldn\'t make a decision earlier. >> Did you mean: Then I regret why I couldn\'t make a decision immediately. Even worse,the consequence can be totally different from what I expected even though I had a hard time determining things. >> Correct On a second thought,however,it is natural that making an important decision makes people nervous. >> Correct >> OR: On a second thought,however, it is natural that people feel nervous when making decisions. But excessive anxiety doesn\'t help us decide in a right direction,so I\'m trying to loosen up a bit when I make decisions./ >> But excessive anxiety doesn\'t help us make a good decision. >> Correct If I leave a few minutes later,I have to wait a bus. >> If I will leave a few minutes later, I have to wait for the bus. Then,because I transfer from the bus to the subway,I may miss the right time to get on the subway./ >> And then because I transfer from the bust to the subway, I may miss the right time to get on the subway. You\'re supposed to finish this task by today./ >> Correct I don\'t get why she doesn\'t clean up after herself./ >> Did you mean: I don\'t get it why she doesn\'t clean up herself. It seems like ages since I last traveled Europe./ >> It seems like ages since I last traveled to Europe. It was a tough day. >> Correct

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