8.1 Homework :)
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It is difficult for me to make decisions about important things.It takes a long time because I think the possible effects of my decision carefully.Acually, speaking of the dark side,I'm more of a indecisive person.Sometimes I spend too much time on hesitating and lose a good opportunity.Then I regret why I couldn't make a decision earlier.Even worse,the consequence can be totally different from what I expected even though I had a hard time determining things.On a second thought,however,it is natural that making an important decision makes people nervous.But excessive anxiety doesn't help us decide in a right direction,so I'm trying to loosen up a bit when I make decisions./If I leave a few minutes later,I have to wait a bus.Then,because I transfer from the bus to the subway,I may miss the right time to get on the subway./You're supposed to finish this task by today./I don't get why she doesn't clean up after herself./It seems like ages since I last traveled Europe./It was a tough day.
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It is difficult for me to make decisions about important things.
>> Correct
It takes a long time because I think the possible effects of my decision carefully.
>> It takes a long time because I think about the possible effects of my decisions carefully.
Acually, speaking of the dark side,I\'m more of a indecisive person.
>> Correct
Sometimes I spend too much time on hesitating and lose a good opportunity.
>> Sometimes I spend too much time on hesistating and lose good opportunities.
Then I regret why I couldn\'t make a decision earlier.
>> Did you mean: Then I regret why I couldn\'t make a decision immediately.
Even worse,the consequence can be totally different from what I expected even though I had a hard time determining things.
>> Correct
On a second thought,however,it is natural that making an important decision makes people nervous.
>> Correct
>> OR: On a second thought,however, it is natural that people feel nervous when making decisions.
But excessive anxiety doesn\'t help us decide in a right direction,so I\'m trying to loosen up a bit when I make decisions./
>> But excessive anxiety doesn\'t help us make a good decision. >> Correct
If I leave a few minutes later,I have to wait a bus.
>> If I will leave a few minutes later, I have to wait for the bus.
Then,because I transfer from the bus to the subway,I may miss the right time to get on the subway./
>> And then because I transfer from the bust to the subway, I may miss the right time to get on the subway.
You\'re supposed to finish this task by today./
>> Correct
I don\'t get why she doesn\'t clean up after herself./
>> Did you mean: I don\'t get it why she doesn\'t clean up herself.
It seems like ages since I last traveled Europe./
>> It seems like ages since I last traveled to Europe.
It was a tough day.
>> Correct
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