8. 1 Homework

2018-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. Do you think it is good for children to experience life in a foreign country? I have been always in Korean so I don't know it's good experience well. But I have some friends who lived in a foreign country when they're children. They're good at English and thier thought is more global than normal people. When I see them, I think it' good experience. Many the rich try to send thier children to a foreign school in this reason. So long as I have much money, I will send my children to a foreign school.(Sadly, I don't have children and money.)

강사 첨삭

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- Blair


I have been always in Korean so I don\'t know it\'s good experience well. But I have some friends who lived in a foreign country when they\'re children. They\'re good at English and thier thought is more global than normal people. When I see them, I think it\' good experience. Many the rich try to send thier children to a foreign school in this reason. So long as I have much money, I will send my children to a foreign school.(Sadly, I don\'t have children and money.)


I have always stayed in Korea so I don\'t know if it\'s really a good experience, but I have some friend who lived in a foreign country when they were children. They\'re good at English and their thoughts are more open than normal people. Whenever I see them, I come to think it\'s a good experience. Many rich families, send their children to a foreign school for this reason, so long as I have much money, I will send my children to a foreign school.

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