8.1 homework
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1. Actually, I love all genre of movies but if I select just one genre, it will be SF movie.
>>>Actually, I love all movie genres but if I have to select just one genre, it will be Sci-fi movies.
2. The reason why I love SF movie is that there are lot of scenes using computer graphic.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>One of the main reasons why I love Sci-fi movies is the fact that a lot of its scenes use computer graphics.
3. Additionally, in SF movies, there are a lot of interesting stories that cannot occur in reality so they stimulate my imagination.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> In addition, Sci-fi movies portray a lot of interesting stories that can never happen in reality.
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