8/1 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[How do you manage to deal with rude people/colleague?]
It\'s me...... hahaha...
I think I am a rude person at work.
I want to be a great and perfect career woman.
However, when I get a very important work, I feel very strong pressure because I want to finish the work perfectly.
So, I keep putting off work.
This is my habit I hate the most.
In the laboratory, some students are a similar kind of person.
So, when I work with them, I exactly set the deadline.
Then, although the quality of the results is not satisfactory, we can get a draft and advance it.
This is a good solution.
I think the best way to finish work well is making a draft and revise continuously.
Finally, we can make an absolutely different result compare with the draft.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much with catching up with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I think making a draft is really a very good idea. It\'s the same with life. Plan first before you decide on anything, because if you are not satisfied with the result, you will never get it back or change it! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
It\'s me...... hahaha...
>>Correct
I think I am a rude person at work.
I think I am a rude person at work.
>>Correct
I want to be a great and perfect career woman.
I want to be a great and perfect career woman.
>>Correct
However, when I get a very important work, I feel very strong pressure because I want to finish the work perfectly.
However, when I get a very important work, I feel very strong pressure because I want to finish the work perfectly.
>>However, when I get a very important work, I feel a lot of pressure because I want to finish the work perfectly.
So, I keep putting off work.
So, I keep putting off work.
>>Correct
This is my habit I hate the most.
This is my habit I hate the most.
>>Correct
In the laboratory, some students are a similar kind of person.
In the laboratory, some students are a similar kind of person.
>>In the laboratory, some students are just like me.
So, when I work with them, I exactly set the deadline.
So, when I work with them, I exactly set the deadline.
>>Correct
Then, although the quality of the results is not satisfactory, we can get a draft and advance it.
Then, although the quality of the results is not satisfactory, we can get a draft and advance it.
>>So, if the quality of the results is not satisfactory, we can make a draft and make the necessary changes.
This is a good solution.
This is a good solution.
>>Correct
I think the best way to finish work well is making a draft and revise continuously.
I think the best way to finish work well is making a draft and revise continuously.
>>Correct
Finally, we can make an absolutely different result compare with the draft.
Finally, we can make an absolutely different result compare with the draft.
>>Finally, we can make an absolutely different result compared with the draft.
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