8. 10 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY TYPE:
In many countries, it is common for families to own and run their own business.
Some people think this is the best way to run a business while others consider this a potential source of problems.
What is your opinion?
I don't like to do something like bussiness with close people. Busssiness isn't like playing. It contains money so makes people selfish. I think it's more comfortable to do business with people who have some distance.
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I don\'t like to do something like bussiness with close people. Busssiness isn\'t like playing. It contains money so makes people selfish. I think it\'s more comfortable to do business with people who have some distance.
I don\'t like to do business with close people especially my relatives nor my family. Business isn\'t like playing. It involves money, and most of the time, money make people become selfish, which can cause misunderstandings between people. I think it\'s more comfortable to do business with people who are not related to us.
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