8.10 homework
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I think that It is positive. Because Variety of experience is very important.
>> I think it is positive because varieties of experiences are very important.
it takes to wide thought for myself and This social experience is the base for future work.
>> It helps to widen our thoughts about ourselves and social experiences are basis for future work.
But If they make light of study it is not correct.
>> But if they take studies lightly, then it is not correct.
It is just parttime job for social experience.
>> Correct
If they make light of study for work, they can work that they dont want in the future.
>> If they exchange studies with work, they will have a job that they don\'t want to have in the future.
If They hope to work that enjoy themselves, don\'t make light of study.
>> So if they want a job/work that they will enjoy, they should not take studies lightly.
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